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:iconworldpeaceismine:
First of all, if this didnt have a hundred word minimum, i would just say,

Thank you for this.

But sadly, i have to write a hundred words. So, on to business.

For all the aspects of this critique, i have given you about 5 stars for each. That is because this piece of writing has meant the most to me throughout my whole life of reading, from a toddler to the present. This is the most relatable piece I've read ever. I have not known what has been bothering me, or even the people around me. So as said earlier, thank you for helping me realize that I need to pay more attention. And to learn my... I don't know what to write anymore.

Please ignore the shit I have written and look at this.

Thank you.
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:iconprussianpersephone:
PrussianPersephone Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
...All I have to say is thank you for the words.
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:iconworldpeaceismine:
worldpeaceismine Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I hate complicated long things. I'm a simple person. But thanks. You too.
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