Mute TranslucenceShe is trapped in a glass box
First of all, if this didnt have a hundred word minimum, i would just say,
Thank you for this.
But sadly, i have to write a hundred words. So, on to business.
For all the aspects of this critique, i have given you about 5 stars for each. That is because this piece of writing has meant the most to me throughout my whole life of reading, from a toddler to the present. This is the most relatable piece I've read ever. I have not known what has been bothering me, or even the people around me. So as said earlier, thank you for helping me realize that I need to pay more attention. And to learn my... I don't know what to write anymore.
Please ignore the shit I have written and look at this.