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    The loud chatter of everyone around me increases my anxiety and my footsteps turn stiffer and stiffer, seeming near frozen. As the emotional frost completely freezes my feet ten times over, I stand still, my heart palpitating and the air from my lungs coming out in short, choked breaths. As I scan my surroundings warily, a shrill ringing shocks me to the core. The school bell. Everyone hurries towards the directions of their separate classrooms, paying no attention to the poor girl right in the middle of all the chaos. The shoves and pushes I receive are hurting me terribly, and I fall, as the crowd clears away... till there’s one figure left in the silent hallway, filled only with resistant sobs. The barely audible thud of his shoes sound as he walks towards me, and I cringe, hoping the insults that would come would only be light punches to my soul. However, I was wrong... A hand was extended and I looked up, meeting a kind smile. 




“Hi, I’m Jamie Bennett.”




    As you were remembering your first day of school by your locker, a shady figure creeped up behind you, grinning devilishy, and suddenly... “BOO!” You turned around, with a clearly bored expression on your face, staring at the boy who was your best friend.


    “Jamie, I’m not a kid anymore. ‘BOO’-ing at me will not scare me. At all.” Saying that, you patted his soft head of brown hair, chuckling at the obvious pout on his still childish face. 


    “One can believe, ______!” Your friend’s very own catchphrase poured out of his mouth and he smiled like a superhero in those comics... or he tried to. Seeing how he was failing miserably, you pushed him along to his locker, extinguishing any chance of him embarrassing himself with his horrible impressions. As you struggled to push him, looking up, you found your face stuck in his huge mop of hair. Not long, but not short either. 


    “Dude, you need to cut your hair. I can’t breathe in it.” With that, you pushed him straight up and panted heavily, finally being able to breathe again. 


    “My hair is perfectly fine, ______. You know winter’s coming? My favourite season of all!” Hearing the extremely sudden change of topic, you sighed, wishing your friend could focus more on what was happening around him. “Hey ______. Remember to wear your jacket. You don’t want Jack Frost nippin’ at your nose, so you?” 


      Sighing again, you said, “Jamie, you’re not my mom, I can take care of myself! And I don’t believe, okay? I never have. So please stop saying things like that!”


    Huffing at that statement, Jamie crossed his arms and mumbled something. You cocked an eyebrow, questioning what his words were. Unfortunately, that action was wasted. He ignored it and added, with a fiery determination in his eyes, “______, can you come to my place after school? I wanna show you something.” As the last word slipped out of his mouth, he dashed off, leaving you absolutely no chance to say no. You groaned, knowing you couldn’t change that stubborn boy’s mind. At the shrill sound of the bell ringing, you trudged towards your classroom, not at all anticipating the rest of the day.

YAYYYYYYYY!!!! LOOK AT DAT STORY!!!!!

I'm so proud. I used Jamie Bennett in this! :iconfuckyeahplz:

Hope y'all like it!

P.S. You do NOT believe in any fairytales or any of the Guardians.

Chap 1: :iconreadingplz:
chap 2: [link]
chap 3: [link]

EDIT: Thanks so much to :iconstellamarris: for pointing out my 1st and 3rd person error! I've changed it.
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Piper15 Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Yay Jamie's in it!!!!
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Melvey Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2014
oeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee... JAMIE! YOU DOG! XD
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JackFgf Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2014
Who does she think she is?!?! 'I don't believe' ...........heh I'll teach her to believe 
Mmmwwwwaaahahahahahaha!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ;) 
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worldpeaceismine Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Haha there's a reason for this but I guess you'll have to wait and see. All my stories are currently in hiatus because schoolwork and studies are really hectic now.
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JackFgf Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2014
Ohh...! OK! :)
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Piper15 Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Hahaha she you we'll in my wears ion she would be me hehehe
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JackFgf Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2014
Sorry love, I don't quite understand. 
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Konakona321 Featured By Owner May 9, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
Someone needs to make A Jamie X Reader somewhere!
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:iconworldpeaceismine:
worldpeaceismine Featured By Owner May 10, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I'm writing one now, actually. But I'm using the same first paragraphs of this chapter.
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Konakona321 Featured By Owner May 10, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
HOLY MOLEY REALLY?! finish it soon!
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:iconworldpeaceismine:
worldpeaceismine Featured By Owner May 10, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
It has a bit of a sad background though.

I will! :)
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:iconkonakona321:
Konakona321 Featured By Owner May 11, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
As long as it exists! you'll be the first one!
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:iconworldpeaceismine:
worldpeaceismine Featured By Owner May 12, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Really? There are really no other ones out there? I'd better get to work, then.
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lupus-astra Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
This is promising...though, the large amount of spacing bothers me a bit. I think this can hold the reader's interest because there's that air of "more will happen" in this...if you get my meaning. I'll check out the next chapter, and that'll be it for my critiquing because I wasn't planning on being online much today.
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worldpeaceismine Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks for this. :)
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theangelofdeath777 Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2012
CH.2 please
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:iconworldpeaceismine:
worldpeaceismine Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
coming soon! :D
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Serori Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Interesting, I'm curious to see what chapter 2 brings
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FrostBite98 Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
This is just too cool please continue!
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StellaMarris Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
This is interesting. My only critic is that you switched to 1st person instead of staying in 2nd person. If you have a tendency to do that, I recommend getting someone to edit your reader inserts.
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worldpeaceismine Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
For flashbacks, I usually do 1st person. To me, it's a bit more natural. But I'm sorry if it's a bit peculiar for you...
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StellaMarris Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I get that. There was a place near the bottom where you switched from second to first and then back again.
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worldpeaceismine Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh. That's speech. You're speaking to Jamie there. If I'm still wrong about where you're referring to, could you please quote the paragraph or sentence where that happened?
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StellaMarris Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
“One can believe, ______!” Your friend’s very own catchphrase poured out of his mouth and he smiled like a superhero in those comics... or he tried to. Seeing how he was failing miserably, I pushed him along to his locker, extinguishing any chance of him embarrassing himself with his horrible impressions. As I struggled to push him, looking up, I found my face stuck in his huge mop of hair. Not long, but not short either.


There.
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worldpeaceismine Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks! I'm so sorry for the trouble. Thanks for telling me!
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StellaMarris Featured By Owner Dec 25, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
You're welcome. I like to edit.
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ananas-desu Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2012
ohlord, this is AMAZING :D I love the idea! C:
can't wait for more! ;D
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:iconworldpeaceismine:
worldpeaceismine Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks!
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ananas-desu Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2012
you're welcome!
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JadeArx Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
cool ^^
whens the next part? ^^
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worldpeaceismine Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I'm not sure, I'll probably start on it tomorrow butI'm not sure how long it'll be...but I'll try to work as fast as I can.
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JadeArx Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
the start is pritty interesting! i hope you will write a long story! ^^
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worldpeaceismine Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks! I think I will. I favour longer stories.
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JadeArx Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
yeeeey then il be a folower of the storie till it ends! ^^
I love long stories too! ^^
btw merry christmas! ^^ :glomp:
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worldpeaceismine Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh yeah! You too!
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JadeArx Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:D
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blue-raindrop Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2012
Wow I can't wait to read more! I've never seen Jamie be used in a fan fic like this :)
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worldpeaceismine Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
wow thanks! I thought using him to make the reader believe was a pretty good idea so i went with it. thanks for the feedback!
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blue-raindrop Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2012
It was a pretty good idea :) And you're welcome!
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worldpeaceismine Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks! :D
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